Apr 25 2008

Nobody Else But You

Published by The Gift at 7:56 pm under Poem

Inky Pinky Pooh
Honey I still love you.
You’re a woven ream
Satisfying all my Dreams
A subject constantly on my mind
It eats away at my time.
When can you be mine?
If it be true, put on your shoes
Nothing more to excuse
For we have nothing more to lose.

One Response to “Nobody Else But You”

  1. # masiogradieon 27 Apr 2008 at 12:32 pm

    Inky Pinky Pooh….???
    Hmmmm. I think, although, the content is sweet - if not a little sickly, your metre is a bit muddled. The rhyme reads a little hastily & on average every line has one or two words too many.

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