Apr 11 2008
Music is fluid
Music is fluid
It comes and goes
The chameleon shade
Near a fruit that’s always ripening.
I love it
I listen as often I can
Music my greatest love of the land.
Music is fluid
Cd, radio, mp3 and FM
Any format it’s like liquid
That always flows from the top of the fountain
Moving, oozing always to a constant beat.
One Response to “Music is fluid”
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I like the image of fluidity and movement. Oozing is a great word! I think you’re trying too hard to make the poem rhyme though… just let it flow- “of the land” doesn’t feel right. The word choices feel a little unnatural in parts like that. The rest is beautiful.