http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/economize/ Poems posted by the poets Fri, 30 Jul 2010 11:15:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/economize/comment-page-1/#comment-20 ngawaka19 Sun, 28 Oct 2007 11:04:49 +0000 http://aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/26/economize/#comment-20 I love this poem. Great stuff. I know I've got to be a little bit technical in my comments so; i felt apart of its fluidity, like a flow of one thought into the next connection, I was totally there with it. I loved when you mentioned 'here I am writing poetry', f....... A! What else is there. I think that was the hi light. Because you were sereal, you stepped outside the poem to see yourself writing it. Chur. Wikard. 10 points sis/bro. I love this poem. Great stuff. I know I’ve got to be a little bit technical in my comments so; i felt apart of its fluidity, like a flow of one thought into the next connection, I was totally there with it. I loved when you mentioned ‘here I am writing poetry’, f……. A! What else is there. I think that was the hi light. Because you were sereal, you stepped outside the poem to see yourself writing it. Chur. Wikard. 10 points sis/bro.

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