Comments on: haiku http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/30/haiku/ Poems posted by the poets Tue, 08 Jul 2008 21:44:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.2 By: ngawaka19 http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/30/haiku/#comment-23 ngawaka19 Tue, 30 Oct 2007 07:53:43 +0000 http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/30/haiku/#comment-23 I kind of get this. I need to keep reading it, I'm a bit dumb, so need some time to get it. but I totally get these lines, they hold me..... October sleeps.......Daylight hides in the basement ...............When castro was young...few cars......still driving though love it too much I kind of get this. I need to keep reading it, I’m a bit dumb, so need some time to get it. but I totally get these lines, they hold me…..

October sleeps…….Daylight hides in the basement ……………When castro was young…few cars……still driving though

love it

too much

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