http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/28/a-lament/ Poems posted by the poets Tue, 08 Jul 2008 21:43:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.2 http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/28/a-lament/#comment-25 ngawaka19 Tue, 30 Oct 2007 08:20:17 +0000 http://www.aucklandpoetry.com/wordpress/2007/10/28/a-lament/#comment-25 thank you this has gotta be up there on the top floor. yes, this poem, your way of writing this poem, its phat but economic with words. "Air condition unit"......wickard man, .simple but i see the depth, I feel him holding back, he's only let a little bit out, I can tell this guy has so much more to say, the integrity in his lightness of expression makes me know he has so much more frustration to express. But he doesn't. it leaves me, humbled and admirable of him. leaves me wanting more thank you this has gotta be up there on the top floor. yes, this poem, your way of writing this poem, its phat but economic with words. “Air condition unit”……wickard man, .simple but i see the depth, I feel him holding back, he’s only let a little bit out, I can tell this guy has so much more to say, the integrity in his lightness of expression makes me know he has so much more frustration to express. But he doesn’t. it leaves me, humbled and admirable of him. leaves me wanting more

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